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recent picture of Hannah getting older ... Smile it has been a few years since i took a picture

Camera:Sony NEX-6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:22 Nov 2012 - 4:00 PM
ISO:400
Title:Hannah
Username:photographyron photographyron
Uploaded:24 Nov 2012 - 12:58 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, General, Portraits / people
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rontear
rontear e2 Member 11rontear vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
24 Nov 2012 - 1:34 PM

Growing up before your eyes !! Ronald.
Ron.

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parob
parob e2 Member 3parob vcard France69 Constructive Critique Points
24 Nov 2012 - 2:26 PM

Beautiful portrait! You wanted to focus on the eyes, it is evident, but I must say you a also managed to capture a tenderness that seems to infuse the entire shot. Changing anything here would more than likely detract from what you wanted to achieve. Kudos. Paul

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
24 Nov 2012 - 2:52 PM

Very pleasant nicely cropped portrait with considerable merit. Wonder if the eyes could be a little sharper and you give us no exposure infot. Looks a bit cool. I like this type of portrait slightly warm even if not entirely accurate. Lift the yellow and red channels just a touch.

Paul

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2794 Constructive Critique Points
24 Nov 2012 - 4:51 PM

A very attractive shot. I love the diagonal presentation, works well.

Colour temp is too cool for sure, - needs to be warmer, and her eyes can be a lot sharper, - Im sure the original is sharp, probably just compression caused detail loss.


Ive uploaded a mod to show what I mean,


regards


Willie

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Coleslaw
Coleslaw e2 Member 913403 forum postsColeslaw vcard Wales28 Constructive Critique Points
24 Nov 2012 - 10:14 PM

Wow, it has been such a long time, Ron!!!!!!
Your photos were once my inspiration, so I am glad you are back.

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parob
parob e2 Member 3parob vcard France69 Constructive Critique Points
25 Nov 2012 - 11:32 AM

Back again with a mod in which I tried to preserve the blue-green of the eyes. Added a gentle S-curve, then tweaked the colour balance, specifically the blue channel, -21 highlights and -31 midtones. I think my skin-tones are a bit too yellow, I wonder. I measured my RBG as 240, 233, 207. I see a strong colour cast on the original shot. It vanishes on the mods. Recently upgraded my graphic card to quadro fx 1800, then calibrated my monitor with my i1 display pro. Am I still having colour problems? What do you think?
Paul

Last Modified By parob at 25 Nov 2012 - 11:36 AM

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Robert51
Robert51  5 United Kingdom14 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2012 - 12:03 AM

Great picture and just love those eyes.

I have upload a mod where I gave the image a high key effect and then warmed it up a bit. Hope you like it.

Robert

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