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just having a 5 mi rest amid all the hustle and bustle of a very busy blackpool.dont normally post pictures of my children but couldnt resist this one

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 G VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:31 Aug 2012 - 4:16 PM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/2000sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:Sunny
Title:sitting
Username:garreth55 garreth55
Uploaded:2 Sep 2012 - 1:47 PM
Tags:General, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 9710 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2671 Constructive Critique Points
4 Sep 2012 - 1:38 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

You did a good job getting way down low for this, - makes a nice shot.


Your daughters face seems a little bit soft, - whereas the areas behind her are sharper, - its possible, - just a guess, she was a little too close to the lens? But a little sharpening locally tidies it up.


I would crop the top, and move the seagull over, - nice coincidence to get it in, - all done in the mod,




regards



Willie

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arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
7 Sep 2012 - 4:34 AM

i agree with willie to crop more the top to make it more focus to the kids. i really like the pose and i'm thinking what does she look at.

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