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Taken during the fantastic session that I shared with Cole at John Barone's studio day. Thanks for the company Cole, the help John and the hard work Monika! Critique welcomed...

Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Lens:17-40
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Monika
Username:Geraint Geraint
Uploaded:27 Apr 2010 - 8:30 AM
Tags:Black & white, Flash / lighting, Portraits / people
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johnnyboy114
27 Apr 2010 - 8:39 AM

Great emotion conveyed here....almost claustrophobic. There is a despair in her expression, the arm makes it feel as though she has been scratching at the wall for ages....this is a good, tight crop to convey all sorts of emotion and the mono treatment makes this work more so.....the leggings make the bottom right corner very dark (as they did with Cole's last upload, so something going on there with the leggings, not anyones fault), but for this, kind of adds to the atmosphere.....

I really am no expert and I am still trying my best to live up to you guys, but I know a good image when I see it and this is a good image. Top notch and shortlisted....

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Coleslaw
Coleslaw e2 Member 913403 forum postsColeslaw vcard Wales28 Constructive Critique Points
27 Apr 2010 - 8:48 AM

I like the mood in this one, the closed eyes.....

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Angi_Wallace
Angi_Wallace e2 Member 6172 forum postsAngi_Wallace vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
27 Apr 2010 - 8:54 AM

Superb
Angi

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
27 Apr 2010 - 8:56 AM

Like the pose and expression from Mon - good lighting and tones, All make this a fine image.
Regards Richard

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Geraint
Geraint  7715 forum posts Wales34 Constructive Critique Points
28 Apr 2010 - 8:54 AM

Thank you all.

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MediumSizeUnavailable

very good Geraint; both this and the next upload. I do think one needs to see a bit (more) detail on the leggings though. now, looking in with daylight, I don't see any detail at all, and before, when I looked at night time, I barely could make out some detail. interesting how Cole and you went for a very different style. both with very good results for that matter. And, must also say that the model does some really terrific posing. So complements for her too.

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