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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:5 Apr 2012 - 7:21 PM
Focal Length:105mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/13.0
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:On, Fired
Title:Sandra
Username:GFJ GFJ
Uploaded:8 Apr 2012 - 8:47 AM
Tags:Black & white, Flash / lighting, Nude / glamour, Portraits / people
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Votes:33

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sherlob
sherlob e2 Member 82318 forum postssherlob vcard United Kingdom125 Constructive Critique Points
8 Apr 2012 - 9:18 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I really like this - there is a lot to like about it, but I have a couple of niggles...

1. The object on the left hand side of the image grabs your attention and pulls your eyes away from the model. This would be easy to correct with the clone tool or similar.
2. More subtle, but similar to no.1. There is a small patch of the texture (?wall paper) just above the object on the left side of the frame (to the left of the models arm) where the texture has become lost. Once seen - again this pulls your eye.

As ever this is just an opinion - naught more.

Best wishes,

Adam

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danmclean
danmclean  8 Australia1 Constructive Critique Points
8 Apr 2012 - 9:20 AM

Love the pose, the use of light and the tones it has created,,,

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 33139 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom102 Constructive Critique Points
8 Apr 2012 - 9:49 AM

A lovely composition, love the light, love the tones, hate the wooden block, and over zealous use of a brush, as pointed out by Adam. However still very much worthy of my vote

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reaper4252
8 Apr 2012 - 7:15 PM

Great shot superbly lit, but feel I have to agree with Adam, minor distractions but easily sorted

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robCPS
robCPS  6 United Kingdom
8 Apr 2012 - 7:54 PM

Great shot but have to agree with sherlob. Cloning out the items on the left will turn a really good shot into a great one.

Rob

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dudler
dudler Critique Team 1196 forum postsdudler vcard England291 Constructive Critique Points
15 Apr 2012 - 7:24 AM

Glad to make this a 30...

All the above comments are true: and it is still a wonderful shot. Just croppping would be my choice, I think - though this risks spoiling hte halo effect by cutting through it.

Excellent work!

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