Pagodas at Dawn

CathR (e2 Member)

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31 Dec 2010 - 5:54 PM

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I've not been to Orford Ness but I guess you wanted to convey the sense of isolation of the place. I think you can still do that Mike without having the structures at quite such a distance. The thing is that the foreground is very featureless. I know it's part of the scenery there but if you crop some off (see mod) you make more of a feature of the pagodas.

You have the makings of some interesting light in the sky area. In my mod I tried to help it along by using the dodge tool to lighten some of the cloud formations to the right of the pic.

Best wishes for your photography in 2011, Mike.

Catherine

paulbroad

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3 Jan 2011 - 11:24 AM

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A good idea and great potential. Up the contrast quite a bit, burn in the top left sky and crop the bottom to increase the moody feeling and you have an improvement on a good idea.

Paul