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This was taken at the Sunderland International Airshow.
I've always wanted to try this sort of photography and finally got the chance this year.
Any comments greatly appreciated.

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A200
Lens:Tamron 70-300 Check out Totally Tamron!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:31 Jul 2011 - 2:06 PM
Focal Length:120mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:+1.3
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Royal Navy Black Cats display team
Username:Gordonsimpson Gordonsimpson
Uploaded:8 Aug 2011 - 9:15 AM
Tags:Black cats, Royal navy, Transport
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gingerdelight
gingerdelight e2 Member 8298 forum postsgingerdelight vcard United Kingdom11 Constructive Critique Points
8 Aug 2011 - 11:55 AM

Looks good to me!
Carol

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pamelajean Critique Team 8831 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
8 Aug 2011 - 10:08 PM

For someone who hasn't tried this before, Gordon, I think you have done well. This is certainly not my type of photography, but I know that people like the rotors to have motion blur, and you have that here. I agree with Frank about the placement, but realise there was probably very little you could have done about it if you wanted them both in the frame. I have done a modification where I shifted the bottom helicopter slightly. I also applied a Smart Photo Fix in PSP. See what you think.
There are what look like dust bunnies in your sky, and please forgive me if they are not, but I have marked them on a second modification.
Pamela.

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