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Driving through the Upper Ninth Ward in New Orleans while doing rebuilding after Katrina, I saw a field of huge chains just begging to be photographed.........

Brand:Minolta Co., Ltd.
Camera:Konica Minolta Dimage A1
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:12 Jan 2007 - 12:56 AM
Focal Length:16.7mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.2
Aperture:f/4.5
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Ship Chain
Username:handlerstudio handlerstudio
Uploaded:16 Jan 2013 - 1:45 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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Hermanus
Hermanus  1 South Africa
16 Jan 2013 - 2:31 PM

What a find !! Excellent photo !!Grin

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marshfam19
marshfam19 e2 Member 5marshfam19 vcard United Kingdom
16 Jan 2013 - 7:40 PM

Great variety of different colours of rust. Well spotted and shot.

Mary

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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jan 2013 - 4:24 PM

Peter, presumeably you moved the chains to the top left to balance the picture?

A nice picture and yes, it was just asking to be taken. However for this shot I would not have been using an aperture as large as f4.5, this calls for a maximum of f8 as far as I can see, maybe even f11 but to be fair all the chainss eem to be in reasonable focus.

One thing I would just have to do here is to clone out the wire across the centre of your picture, the one fastened with a reef knot, to me it spoils the overall effect, the other one down to th bottom right is not so prominent and could IMHO be left.

Otherwise well spotted and well recorded.

Frank

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pamelajean Critique Team 8685 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1530 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jan 2013 - 4:24 PM

These rusty chains are a great subject, Peter, and there is a lot of potential here for getting different angles.
The chain at the bottom is not only out of focus, but a totally different colour to the rest, with some pink colouring too, and I see it as a distraction. Anything that doesn’t strengthen your image actually weakens it, so it's all about deciding what's in or out.
You went in quite close, but I would suggest going in even closer. I find that closeup detail of rusty chains looks far more interesting that an image of the whole pile. My preference would be to fill the frame with your chains, and this could significantly strengthen your composition. Aiming for simplicity is often the best strategy. You can adjust a composition in post processing, but it's far better to get it as close as you can in camera first.
By having the right-hand chains in front of the ones on the left, you have achieved a feeling of depth, and have also managed to keep all of those at the top in focus.
The colour and shapes of the ones at the top are good, but could be enhanced to brighten the rust colour and bring out a bit more of the texture, should that be your desire.
In my modification, I have done a drastic crop that completely eliminates the chains at the bottom. Obviously, such a crop has decreased the quality. I adjusted Levels to add contrast and boost the colours, then sharpened.
Pamela.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jan 2013 - 7:19 PM

Some interest and a lot of rust. The pink on the links at the bottom pull the eye rather. OK if that were the subject, but a little near the bottom. I would prefer a single item which demanded the full attention with the remainder acting as a foil.

Paul

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