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Thanks to all who bothered to comment on my last upload.

I have been having a play with Photoshop and combined two images. One of a girl's face and the other a whirlpool. I would appreciate any comments/views on where I could improve the image.

Cheers for taking the time to advise me, if you do that is!

Paul

Title:Carrieanne
Username:harrattp harrattp
Uploaded:3 Aug 2010 - 3:06 PM
Camera:Nikon D200 combinations Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 18-70mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Tags:Abstract, General, People, Portraits / people, Specialist / abstract
Votes:24

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Gray_ina
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3 Aug 2010 - 4:29 PM
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Hi my mate love this clever shot no advise from the total novice, gray,

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Shroomer
3 Aug 2010 - 5:56 PM
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Stunning work Paul and well manipulated. Love the positioning as it gives the impression of a carefully positioned veil
Richard

gillykins
3 Aug 2010 - 6:01 PM
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Superb work, like this very much.
L&K Gillx

harrattp
3 Aug 2010 - 6:34 PM
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Thank you my friends.

Paul

pluckyfilly
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3 Aug 2010 - 7:20 PM
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I cant advise you but I do like the idea you have presented today

harrattp
3 Aug 2010 - 7:38 PM
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Thank you Ann.

Paul

Gezina
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3 Aug 2010 - 7:54 PM
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Different and interesting Paul - I like the way the whirlpool draws you into the shot and her lovely eyes - good work - Ina

harrattp
3 Aug 2010 - 7:55 PM
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Cheers Ina.

Paul

SurreyHillsMan
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3 Aug 2010 - 9:45 PM
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Like this Paul, really nicely done, very mysterious quality

Jon

teocali
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4 Aug 2010 - 9:05 AM
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WOW Paul - from the thumbnail I could see swirling water and expected to find a fish or diving bird and you come up with a very beautiful and enigmatic "Lady of the Lake"!!! Lovely effects very well executed. Really like this Smile
Sylvia

Maiwand
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4 Aug 2010 - 2:08 PM
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Superb treatment Paul. This works really well and seems to me to capture exactly what you had in mind for the shot. Excellent.
Ron

harrattp
4 Aug 2010 - 4:51 PM
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Cheers Jon, Sylvia and Ron. Much appreciated.
Paul

PeterLaw
4 Aug 2010 - 5:25 PM
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What a really well created shot.
Peter

I think this is fantastic, well done!!

RonnieAG
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6 Aug 2010 - 3:43 AM
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I think you have combined your two shots so very cleverly to produce this rather lovely image. I would not dream of offering any comment re. how to improve it as I feel it is just right as it is. As others have said, the girl appears to be peering through a veil, and this, together with the low lighting, helps to create an air of mystery which is exactly what I'm sure you'd wish to preserve. Very nice bit of work.
Ronnie.

FeatherFriend
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6 Aug 2010 - 11:57 AM
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I couldn't offer any help on how to improve on this Paul, it looks just right as it is to me, lovely idea too,
Geoff.

lonely_oryx
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7 Aug 2010 - 3:12 PM
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Full of mystery

A beautiful image, very well composed and put together. Have you tried changing the colour and highlighting the eyes slightly to get a different effect. This is only a suggestion not a crit as I think this is a lovely image.
Steve.

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dmhuynh72
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9 Aug 2010 - 8:29 PM
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very creative and beautifully done Paul.

regards
Yung

betts
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9 Aug 2010 - 9:28 PM
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Smashing image Paul,,,, very clever..
betts

Ray42
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11 Aug 2010 - 11:05 AM
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Interesting work - love it - good creativity

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