Nice shot little tip tilt the flowers up a little and you dont see the stems so much but nice shot
mike

Hi Neil both good shots but the first shot you need to back off to close
the next one what I would do is bring the leg down bend both and cross the feet so it looks more natrual so the legs are going to her right hand side the bag is big in the frame turn it more side on but the pose is not very good portraits done right are not easy but we can all find fault hope this helps but an excellent try
mike

Nice shot a little tip get the bride to push her foot so you can just see it lovely light
mike