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One from my stock photos "July 2006" Photography in Dubai.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:23 Jul 2006 - 4:14 PM
Focal Length:55mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/6.3
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
Exposure Comp:-1/3
ISO:1600
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Architecture
Username:hasu hasu
Uploaded:23 Mar 2011 - 7:16 PM
Tags:Architecture, Architecture / landscape, Landscape / travel
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franken
franken e2 Member 113056 forum postsfranken vcard Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
23 Mar 2011 - 7:27 PM

Works for me.

Ken

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2800 Constructive Critique Points
23 Mar 2011 - 8:04 PM

HI Harry,

Theres some evidence in this shot of post processing work that could have been done better. I see areas behind the central tree, and down the side of the left tower that appear to have been subject to some treatment, likely brightening.


If you want to have the sky area at the side of the left tower evenly coloured, select the tone you want from the upper part of the shot; the with a small soft brush, paint in close to the building while holding down the shift key. This will provide precisely straight lines.


I have loaded a mod with some of this sorted out (not the tree!), sharpened a little, increased shadow detail, and corrected a very slight lean in the left tower.




Hope this is helpful,

regards


Willie

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hasu
hasu  6 United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
23 Mar 2011 - 8:28 PM

Hi Willie, First of all thank you for the mode and a specially for the explanation, because I was looking at the Mod and could not see much except cleaning the left side (smoke or something was there which I did not bothered to clear!! I suppose due to laziness!) yes I could notice the shadow details which I also did it but I didn't wanted to over do it (for some reason I could see okay in my monitor) but as I said, I could notice the difference and looks much clearer. Believe me or not, I have not touched the central tree and could not see nothing "behind the central tree!!" regards. Harry.

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