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This is Melbourne Victoria Australia across Port Phillip Bay on a very cloudy rainy day The beach cabin which are a tourist attraction to Brighton Beach are highlighted on the right The picture was shot in raw and process in Raw & PS5 following steps by a local photo mag To me it looks as bleak as it was on the day with the clouds just above you and rolling through quite quickly

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Lens:EF28-70mm f/2.8L USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:23 Jun 2011 - 3:11 PM
Focal Length:28mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/16.0
Shutter Speed:1/13sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Across the Bay
Username:Hedoff Hedoff
Uploaded:19 Aug 2011 - 11:10 AM
Tags:Australia, Landscape / travel
Votes:Voting Disabled
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CathR
CathR  7138 forum posts United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
20 Aug 2011 - 10:53 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Sometimes the best conditions for taking photos are when everybody else is heading indoors Wink you have got an interesting sky here Cyril but everything is so far away that the shot loses impact. I have uploaded a mod for you where I have cropped the shot and levelled up the horizon.

Best wishes

Catherine

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Hedoff
Hedoff  2 Australia
20 Aug 2011 - 11:10 PM

Thanks Catherine It certainly does give it more impact and I appreciate your comments

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