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I like this very much - might I suggest cropping from the right to the vertical line, and then from the left to create four equally sized "panels" and just a tiny crop from the top to remove the tiny darker bricks. I know that you haven't asked for critique but I feel this is really worth working with and with a little more contrast it will look great
You've done really well with this Joline, and I imagine that now that you will be considering all sorts of subjects to present in this manner.
A thought provoking write up Arthur
I've had a go at sorting two things with a mod.
Good detail and a great pov.
A splendid find with some excellent tones Pamela- the natural light draws the eye over to the right hand side of the picture where there are some interesting shapes and tools. The very dark bottom left by contrast is quite difficult to work out, and as such I find myself going back to that rather too often, so I wonder if a little lightening there would help
Love the individual shots, and the colours are gorgeous - with a bit of extra work the pictures could be aligned better. If you go into PS and select view, then show, then grid, you can reduce/enlarge/move so that they fit together in a more uniform way. I may be teaching granny to suck eggs, or you may not want that anyway, but Dven showed me how to use that tool and I've always found it very helpful when putting a montage together. Hope that helps and if not no offence intended
Thats a beauty on several levels- well composed on the diagonal, some colourful rust, interesting repeating pattern and also the inclusion of some shadows. Now I learnt from Moira that a diagonal from bottom left to upper right is a positive one, so my only suggestion to improve this would be to flip it and see what you think.