Good shot but I would slightly reduce the blue in the image as it seems as though you are getting a minor blue cast. P

The model is well captured and you have some nice detail. But I find she is being lost in all that background and she is not owning the image. The large white aperture is grabbing the eye.
The concept is great. P

Very nice portrait, but crop above the arms it becomes amazing with wonderful curves and lines. Paul

Please take this the way it is meant.
When you do these always focus on the face and forget the rest. Set you camera to around f8. You will find you will get most images pin sharp. Then when doing this type of work remove the artifacts that detract from the model. i,e Window, Box to left and Dandilion on right. You will find the image takes on a new life. hope this helps and keep it going.
paul

I would tone down the nets and grass as the tend to dominate the image. Then you have a lovely balanced sceene

Tell you what this is a good image. if the bloke with the blonde hair was not there this would be an outstanding image. Any good with PS

Just a couple of points you have just the touch of halo on her right arm and the dress on that side. You could also soften her right side of head a bit more into background. Other wise great picture.
Wonder if you had put the effect across the girl as well if you would get a nice serreal feel with a touch more movement.

Paul

Amazing shapes and patterns. Makes a good black and white, you could tweek in curves to give a touch more tonal range. But good choice of image.

Good eye contact and nice smile. The red is dominating the face a touch. Change the colour.

Very good effort, next time you try, think of what you are wearing as the bright white catches the eye and draws the viewer away from the face. Get a sheet of white card and put it the other side of the head from the light source to bounce light back into the hair. As you are loosing all the detail in your version.
But very good effort.

I will leave the other comments to the rest, but what I would have like to have seen is a different pose with your head, a gentle look down you shoulder and then looking back into the camera would have so much more power. But considering this is a self portrait I think this is a very good effort and good place to go forward from.

Don't know what the mod is but great picture. Couple od very small crits.
Right hand side you can see the bottom of the background, I would clone that away, second is being picky, just clone those bright hairs away on the arm.
The perfect.

I think this is a great idea and you have got the angles and the tone about right, the light is a touch to flat. Increase the light just a touch from the right and bounce a reflactor over the bass shoulder would have made it more bramatic. Also watch your focusing, when taking pictures like this that eye has to be pin sharp. But good effort.