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Sorry to those who voted or commented on this upload yesterday but as Willie pointed out it had a huge yellow cast.
I've corrected this in camera raw.

Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikkor 18-200mm F3.5-5.6 G ED-IF AF-S VR DX Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Claire
Username:Iain_C Iain_C
Uploaded:26 Jul 2009 - 3:48 PM
Tags:General, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10869 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2871 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jul 2009 - 4:02 PM

A lot better Iain


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Iain_C
Iain_C  5 Scotland3 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jul 2009 - 4:03 PM

Thanks Willie Smile

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bayleaf
bayleaf  7 United Kingdom
26 Jul 2009 - 4:21 PM

Lovely capture.
John.

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stuhalloran
26 Jul 2009 - 4:27 PM

pretty model

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oll1e e2 Member 757 forum postsoll1e vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jul 2009 - 11:18 PM

This is a great capture Iain,i love the background effect caused by the dof ,its wonderful .Plus ,i like the way you have placed her in the frame allowing space on the right .
On looking large her left eye is in focus ,but the right eye seems slightly soft .Was she moving at the time.
great work Smile

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Iain_C
Iain_C  5 Scotland3 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jul 2009 - 11:55 PM

Thanks Ollie i don't think the auto focus picked up claires eye i think it has focused on something else not sure what though.

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A Booth
A Booth e2 Member 12A Booth vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jul 2009 - 4:34 PM

lovely outdoor portraits, good skin tones and nicely composed.

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DJLphoto
DJLphoto  5 England6 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jul 2009 - 7:28 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 


Quote: Thanks Ollie i don't think the auto focus picked up claires eye i think it has focused on something else not sure what though.

the problem has been to low an F/stop mate.... making the DoF shallow, therefore making the focus look soft....try a slightly higher f/ number to bring the rest of her face etc into focus but leaving the background blurred

Hope this helps

Darryl

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angie44
angie44  5
29 Jul 2009 - 10:36 AM

beautiful natural portrait . angie

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puffinlady
30 Jul 2009 - 1:56 AM

nice portrait!

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