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My first attempt at shooting with two models all shot on a cold cloudy morning at Loch Lomond while all being attacked by Midges!

Constructive comments welcome.

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Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikkor 50mm F1.8D AF & Nikkor 18-200mm F3.5-5.6 G ED-IF AF-S VR DX Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Debbie & Jen
Username:Iain_C Iain_C
Uploaded:21 Jun 2009 - 9:11 AM
Tags:General, Nude / glamour, Portraits / people
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pure3000
pure3000  5 United Kingdom
21 Jun 2009 - 9:22 AM

Good crisp images.

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rocky41
rocky41  10167 forum posts England
21 Jun 2009 - 9:47 AM

v2 for me

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dudler Critique Team 1195 forum postsdudler vcard England291 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2009 - 9:57 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

On V1, the heart of this is the expressions - trouble waiting to happen?

Some distractions in the background: the top of the wall, and the tree right behind a head. Shooting from a few inches higher would have sorted the one, and a move to the side the other.

Too many variants to comment on all of them: overall, I reckon you've framed too aggressively at times, and cut off (for instance) the top of a head in V9, and there are several arms looking amputated.

However, dealing with two models is very hard work: much more so than one. (I say on the basis of very little experience of working iwth two models! But the little has convinced me!)

I can only suggest practice, practice, practice. Which will be no hardship, I feel!

John

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Iain_C
Iain_C  5 Scotland3 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2009 - 10:05 AM

Thanks John,

I think Trouble waiting to happen discribes these two quite well Smile

Thank you for the advice it is much appreciated i am hoping to get much more practice in with them both in future Smile

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oneill
oneill  6155 forum posts Ireland
21 Jun 2009 - 11:07 AM

they are all beautiful shots,,,,,

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andy210966
21 Jun 2009 - 12:40 PM

Leaps and bounds Iain, leaps and bounds - another great set - have to say your Debs looks a tad nervous in a couple of these... mayhaps it's the midges!!lol

Andy

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Iain_C
Iain_C  5 Scotland3 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2009 - 1:17 PM

Thanks Andy,

Yeah the midges played a huge part by the end of the shoot debbie looked like she had chicken pox due to all the little bite marks!

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shahbaz
shahbaz  10 Pakistan3 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jun 2009 - 5:12 AM

Only two points to mention, one is work with a single model specially the model in red is more confident and attractive, work with her , and the other is use some simple backgrounds where your work highlihgt more rather then the other things which distract the eyes.

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