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Hi all had a studio day today and this is one of my pictures from it,please can you give me some advice on to do you like,dont you like it.

Camera setting's F8 @ 1/125

Thanks for any help,Ian

Brand:Nikon D3000
Camera:Nikon D3000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 55-200mm VR @ 55mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:The Chair
Username:Ian White Ian White
Uploaded:7 Jan 2012 - 4:43 PM
Tags:Portraits / people, Portraits/people
Votes:18

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Mrserenesunrise
Mrserenesunrise e2 Member 459 forum postsMrserenesunrise vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2012 - 8:53 PM

Hi Ian,
Not a bad effort, good exposure on the models skin, The dress and shoes work.
The models expression doesn't work for me.
I hope you will post a few moreSmile

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sherring
sherring  746 forum posts United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jan 2012 - 9:36 AM

I like it, its a good effort.

Steve.

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marksilvester
9 Jan 2012 - 5:43 PM

I agree , this has a lot of promise but does not quite hit the mark.

As has been said, the dress, pose and chair all work, I like the white background just not the patch or grey on the left edge.

The models expression is neither one thing or another a bit like the Mona Lisa smile.

I too would like to see more examples.

Mark

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Ian White
Ian White  12177 forum posts United Kingdom
9 Jan 2012 - 6:10 PM

Thank you all very much i have posted a couple more one yesterday and one today,please take a look.

Thanks,Ian

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eddie1
eddie1 e2 Member 3eddie1 vcard United Kingdom
10 Jan 2012 - 6:42 PM

rhe model is stunning, great capture.

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