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Brand:Nikon CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D5000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 G VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:10 Apr 2011 - 4:41 PM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:320
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Trusses
Username:IanBroadmore IanBroadmore
Uploaded:12 Apr 2011 - 11:20 AM
Tags:Architecture, General, Specialist / abstract
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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.
pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8831 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
12 Apr 2011 - 7:19 PM

Hello, Ian. I like the strong lines in this, and also the contrast of the windows, and the patterns they make on the floor. Because there is very little colour in the image, I was tempted to do a mono (see 1st mod) and adjust levels for more contrast. I also rotated the image in order to straighten the far line of the floor, as I felt there needed to be a straight line somewhere. I also cropped, which was necessary after the rotation, but especially on the right side because I wanted to eliminate a bit of the large dark areas top right, which kept drawing my eye. My second mod goes the opposite way, and I tried to bring out the colours that were present, especially the blue in the windows and the gold elsewhere. In this one, I used Perspective Correction for the straightening, so there is a bit of difference between this and the 1st mod.
Pamela.

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