The C Set

Richsr (e2 Member)

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27 Nov 2012 - 8:45 AM

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Well seen have you looked at a crop with just the three people in it might be worth a look,as it would focus you more on their characters rather then the overall scene
Regards Richard

Focus_Man

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27 Nov 2012 - 9:17 AM

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The above was my immediate initial thought as well Ian. The lady to the right with her bright dogtooth coat does seem to attract one's eyes, when your picture really is the three to the left. Given the modern day garb worn by the subjects I think colour would help with this particular image.

I feel you have a candid here Ian and as you are not holding the subjects up to ridicule I don't see any intrusion.

Frank

EAS (e2 Member)

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27 Nov 2012 - 10:12 AM

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V2 works really well.

Ann

banehawi (Critique Team)

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27 Nov 2012 - 12:57 PM

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This is a super candid shot, works just great as converted Ian. I think V1 by a country mile, as it conveys the sense of people having a casual coffee, and the juxtaposition of the two on the right add a completely different dimension to what would be a rather ordinary shot.


Great work



Regards


Willie

widtink (e2 Member)

27 Nov 2012 - 7:40 PM

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I like both V2 gets into the characters but V1 is just a great overall scene (no gonnae go against Willie !!!!!)

Rod

iancrowson (e2 Member)

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29 Nov 2012 - 9:43 AM

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Richard, Frank, Maggie, Ann, Andy, Willie, Paul, Rod and Kate
Thank you.
Nine very useful inputs. Great, the photo seems well received and I got some very useful advice. Over half for cropping.
I really am finding this gallery useful for learning
Ian