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Taken with Lensbaby 1.0 at Canary Wharf tube station.

Camera:Canon EOS 300D
Lens:Lensbaby Mk1
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Rush hour
Username:iansamuel iansamuel
Uploaded:17 Jul 2007 - 11:38 AM
Tags:Canary wharf, Lensbaby, London, Portraits / people, Specialist / abstract, Transport, Tube, Underground
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Carabosse
Carabosse e2 Member 1139496 forum postsCarabosse vcard England269 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jul 2007 - 12:32 PM

In a picture in which you want to give a sense of movement it is usually helpful to have something sharp - as a reference point. Everything is a bit too blurry here, including the static bits of the scene.

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randomrubble
17 Jul 2007 - 12:33 PM

I like the lensbaby effect, but I like to see something sharp in shots taken with it, I also find the CA disturbing on this shot.

Good to see a different approach, but it's not for me in this case.

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John_Frid
John_Frid  8514 forum posts United Kingdom56 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jul 2007 - 5:46 PM

Nice to see a creative approach, but I agree with others that it needs something sharp for the eye to rest on.
It may be my monitor, but the image seems a bit dark.

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gyom
gyom  7 France
18 Jul 2007 - 8:24 AM

love it^^
i like your approach and i agree with the above comment (john frid), it is really dark, maybe if it s lighter the silhouette of the woman will looks more sharp and will give a repair point for the eyes!!!
cheers

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iansamuel
iansamuel  10271 forum posts United Kingdom
21 Jul 2007 - 10:38 PM

You're right of course, there should be something that is sharp(er). Probably the girl on the left. But I guess this is just a work in progress, an idea that partly worked.

The darkness I don't mind, and the CA works for me in this.

Thanks

ian

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