Login or Join Now

Upload your photos, chat, win prizes and much more

Username:
Password:
Remember Me

Can't Access your Account?

New to ePHOTOzine? Join ePHOTOzine for free!

Gemma as a Flower

Versions (Before and After)Version Help

Join Now

Join ePHOTOzine, the friendliest photography community.

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more for free!

Add Comment

This is Gemma from a few months ago, two more versions of before and after processing. I'm more than happy for any comments on why you might like one more than another etc.
I'm trying for a look i might expect to see in a magazine.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:18 Feb 2012 - 9:53 AM
Focal Length:28mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Gemma as a Flower
Username:JackAllTog JackAllTog
Uploaded:21 Jul 2012 - 7:04 PM
Tags:Gemma, Metal Flower, Portraits / people
VS Mode Rating 101 (100% won)
These stats show the percentage of wins and the rating score that your photo has achieved. You can go to the VS Mode by clicking on this icon.

Signup to e2

Signup to e2 to see which photo this has won or lost against in the vs mode
Votes:12
Variant - Before/AfterVariant - Before and After

Comments

carper123
carper123 e2 Member 279 forum postscarper123 vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jul 2012 - 8:15 PM

Hi Stuart, nice one i like the composition and version 1. Well done.
Darryl. SmileSmileSmile

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

Russell_Charles

As a novice v1 for me because you have cloned out (removed) the light stand foot bottom right and the other artefact top right. I think v1 is still a little under exposed. If this was a one or two light set up I think your light sources need to come in closer or need the power increasing. IMHO there is too much shadow. Most magazine shoots, unless going for the look are a lot lighter. Certainly on the right path though. Regards

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

Ade_Osman
Ade_Osman e2 Member 114484 forum postsAde_Osman vcard England36 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jul 2012 - 10:15 AM

V1 is obviously the after? Smile Good work IMHO, the only thing that causes me any concern and again it's being exception picky is the amount of bounced highlights coming off the prop, especially on the lower leaf. But as I said this is being really picky again.....

Ade Wink

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

JackAllTog
JackAllTog e2 Member 53535 forum postsJackAllTog vcard United Kingdom58 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jul 2012 - 10:24 AM

Many thanks for all the votes & comments - very much appreciated. Picky is good, at the end of the day its the little things that make the difference.
Thanks
Stuart

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England207 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jul 2012 - 11:00 AM

Well worked with the processing Stuart, some work would be needed to remove the stray hair near to flower if it was to go into a magazine
Regards Richard

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

A Booth
A Booth e2 Member 12A Booth vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
30 Jul 2012 - 7:02 PM

a thoughtful attempt which results in a second glance - points made above need your attention but generally a good result.

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

- Original Poster Comments
- Your Posts

Add a Comment

You must be a member to leave a comment

Username:
Password:
Remember me:
Un-tick this box if you want to login each time you visit.