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A slightly less abstract view of the jewish memorial in Berlin. Will people please give me some feedback for once! Good or bad I really don't mind.
Excellent abstract Jack.
Maybe a little 'tighter' on the DoF in the FG so that the middle distance and BG 'bleed off' off in focus terms...??
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10 mins and no feed back well here's one. I like this. Might be better with a tighter crop though to get rid of the space to the front-left.
Must have been spooky being there.
i would crop out the bottom 1/3 so the floor is visiable, then it would be really abstract.
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Nice shot, LOU
Nice but definitely lacking something. Maybe less DoF to give blur at the back would help?
nice shot. click, howZAT!
actualy, I was thinking sharper, crop and more contrast so it just looked like patterns
I like it, but I would agree with cropping out the front and maybe change the DOF. Also might try tweaking the contrast a little to try adding a bit more depth? Don't know how that would look, but just a suggestion!
More contrast, certainly. Possibly add a gradient fill layer and reduce the opacity so that the f/g is lighter than the b/g, darken the corners using a heavily feathered selection to concentrate attention on the blocks reflecting the light in the f/g and middle distance. Just some more thoughts.
I like the 3d feel to this shot, great patterns, and I like it in B&W. I don't have the technical terms - but maybe a little more contrast would enhance it slightly.
Could do with a touch more contrast I think. That would make it for me
For me I think tighter crop to simplify it and put a border on. Maybe alter the tones or level a little in photoshop for more contrast. Apart from that it is still a good image.
Thanks for the feedback. I'll have a play around with the photo and see how I can change it!
this is very striking and I agree that a tighter crop would give this a lot more impact
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