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9 Sep 2005 - 11:36 AM

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Excellent abstract Jack.

Maybe a little 'tighter' on the DoF in the FG so that the middle distance and BG 'bleed off' off in focus terms...??

Like it.

Mike

Beardy

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9 Sep 2005 - 11:45 AM

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i would crop out the bottom 1/3 so the floor is visiable, then it would be really abstract.

paul

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iansamuel

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9 Sep 2005 - 11:57 AM

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Nice but definitely lacking something. Maybe less DoF to give blur at the back would help?

bexter

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9 Sep 2005 - 1:09 PM

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I like it, but I would agree with cropping out the front and maybe change the DOF. Also might try tweaking the contrast a little to try adding a bit more depth? Don't know how that would look, but just a suggestion!

Becky

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9 Sep 2005 - 2:28 PM

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I like the 3d feel to this shot, great patterns, and I like it in B&W. I don't have the technical terms - but maybe a little more contrast would enhance it slightly.

Sez

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10 Sep 2005 - 12:14 AM

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For me I think tighter crop to simplify it and put a border on. Maybe alter the tones or level a little in photoshop for more contrast. Apart from that it is still a good image.

xinia

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13 Sep 2005 - 4:11 AM

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this is very striking and I agree that a tighter crop would give this a lot more impact