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A slightly less abstract view of the jewish memorial in Berlin. Will people please give me some feedback for once! Good or bad I really don't mind.

Title:Tierful Memorial
Username:jackwatson jackwatson
Uploaded:9 Sep 2005 - 11:29 AM
Tags:Architecture
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User_Removed
9 Sep 2005 - 11:36 AM

Excellent abstract Jack.

Maybe a little 'tighter' on the DoF in the FG so that the middle distance and BG 'bleed off' off in focus terms...??

Like it.

Mike

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shaks
shaks  12561 forum posts Tokelau1 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2005 - 11:39 AM

10 mins and no feed back well here's one. I like this. Might be better with a tighter crop though to get rid of the space to the front-left.

Must have been spooky being there.

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Beardy
Beardy  979 forum posts United Kingdom
9 Sep 2005 - 11:45 AM

i would crop out the bottom 1/3 so the floor is visiable, then it would be really abstract.

paul

p.s. one way of getting your photos to be seen is comment more yourselfSmile

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Lou41
Lou41  9139 forum posts United Kingdom
9 Sep 2005 - 11:47 AM

Nice shot, LOU

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iansamuel
iansamuel  10271 forum posts United Kingdom
9 Sep 2005 - 11:57 AM

Nice but definitely lacking something. Maybe less DoF to give blur at the back would help?

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patters
patters  101781 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2005 - 1:05 PM

nice shot. click, howZAT!
actualy, I was thinking sharper, crop and more contrast so it just looked like patterns

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bexter
bexter  999 forum posts Scotland
9 Sep 2005 - 1:09 PM

I like it, but I would agree with cropping out the front and maybe change the DOF. Also might try tweaking the contrast a little to try adding a bit more depth? Don't know how that would look, but just a suggestion!

Becky

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dark_lord Critique Team 101464 forum postsdark_lord vcard England125 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2005 - 1:24 PM

More contrast, certainly. Possibly add a gradient fill layer and reduce the opacity so that the f/g is lighter than the b/g, darken the corners using a heavily feathered selection to concentrate attention on the blocks reflecting the light in the f/g and middle distance. Just some more thoughts.

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Sezz
Sezz e2 Member 9617 forum postsSezz vcard England15 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2005 - 2:28 PM

I like the 3d feel to this shot, great patterns, and I like it in B&W. I don't have the technical terms - but maybe a little more contrast would enhance it slightly.

Sez Smile

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FrankThomas e2 Member 112762 forum postsFrankThomas vcard United Kingdom
9 Sep 2005 - 2:35 PM

Could do with a touch more contrast I think. That would make it for me

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sprock
sprock  1166 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Sep 2005 - 12:14 AM

For me I think tighter crop to simplify it and put a border on. Maybe alter the tones or level a little in photoshop for more contrast. Apart from that it is still a good image.

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jackwatson
10 Sep 2005 - 3:33 AM

Thanks for the feedback. I'll have a play around with the photo and see how I can change it!

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xinia
xinia  954 forum posts
13 Sep 2005 - 4:11 AM

this is very striking and I agree that a tighter crop would give this a lot more impact

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