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this is my second final piece i created for my real gcse mock... it didnt take me 4 hours though.. around one and a half to two hours.... the theme here was the identity of the person looking through their inner beauty! please feel free to look at my first final piece here, i've given its URL.... please feel free to leave any comments and thoughts for either! anything would be appreciated! Thanks!
http://www.ephotozine.com/user/mohanramyaa-227291/gallery/photo/photoshopped--32...

thanks everyone!

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:22 Jul 2012 - 2:59 AM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/6.3
Shutter Speed:1/1600sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Final Piece 2
Username:mohanramyaa mohanramyaa
Uploaded:5 Feb 2013 - 4:20 PM
Tags:Beauty, Digitally manipulated, Identity
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84281 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
5 Feb 2013 - 5:30 PM

A thought provoking piece - As I looked at it I saw more and more, which lead to a lot of questions! Because you've given the person a 'shadow' the background looks just like a wall (which I assume was on purpose).

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pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly e2 Member 8283 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom33 Constructive Critique Points
5 Feb 2013 - 5:50 PM

Someone more clever than me will leave feedback I don't see the objective myself ramyaa but will ask why cut the feet off anyway - no offence meant, do explain more to me if you wishSmile

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jamestheboy
5 Feb 2013 - 6:42 PM

I had been looking at this image for the last 10 minutes. I can see that you have put a lot of work into this ,I can actually say that I'm just a little bit jealous of its always good to see the Juniors having a go with something unusual and I must say in my eyes you have done a really good job I think it's time for a Cadbury's cream egg award very well done look forward to seeing more like this






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jamestheboy
5 Feb 2013 - 6:46 PM

One thing I missed out good to see that you've put in a shadow behind the main subject well done






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mohanramyaa
5 Feb 2013 - 7:08 PM

hahahaa thanks everyone for your thoughtful comments! karen - i can see why you have a lot of questions, to be honest, i have many too... but having said that, i like to think that everyone see's my work in their own way... ann - i know! it was very annoying because the way that i took the picture of the policeman meant that it was hard to see them... this was because i went on a night time photoshoot - at around : pm to london and took this picture of two policemen, and using them, as their boots were black, it was hard to create the shape of their book using the magnetic lasso tool! thank you anywa, and finally james - thank you so much for your comments! really motivated a young photographer like me! so, where is my egg? (JOKE!)

Just want to say thank you for all your comments, seeing as you've put time and effort! thanks so much, and i'll uploading more of my work! thanks everyone!

ramyaa! Smile

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84281 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
5 Feb 2013 - 7:35 PM


Quote: where is my egg?

Right above my first comment!! Wink

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pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly e2 Member 8283 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom33 Constructive Critique Points
6 Feb 2013 - 12:27 AM

I did wonder if the feet cut off was an optical illusionWink and realise now it was - that's where a little more canvas works and not to have the feet close to the frame, if you see where I am coming from - nice egg from KarenSmile

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mohanramyaa
6 Feb 2013 - 10:26 AM

thanks ann! Smile

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