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please give me critique, this is my first photoshop work!

Lens:photoshop
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:photoshop work!
Username:LiamBull LiamBull
Uploaded:31 May 2012 - 1:26 PM
Tags:Digital art, Digitally manipulated
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55jase
55jase  9186 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
31 May 2012 - 2:15 PM

I would say you have done a good job. if I was to be fussy I would have asked for some spray/splash to come out of your frame with the whale. we can see the spay on his body so I think it needs a little other than that great work.

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84313 forum posts England163 Constructive Critique Points
31 May 2012 - 5:17 PM

To me, this is amazing! But not in my field (I can only do the basics using Photoshop Elements) - James is our expert in this area, I'm sure he'll see and comment on this later!! Grin A big Well Done from me though!

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jamestheboy
31 May 2012 - 6:08 PM

For the last 20 minutes I had been looking at this photo you have done a really good job here this is not the easiest of subjects that you have choose to create an out of bounds photo I have been doing photos like this for a little while now and itís never easy. But I do have to say if you look at the head you should have created a little bit a spray around the head this would have given it a more better effect of an out of bounds photo it is not easy to create spray. but there is a brush in photoshop which is called splatter 59 which you need. Now take example of one of the spray droplets this will give you the colour then use your new brush and create a little of the spray around the head this would give it a more out of bounds affect because at the moment it an object coming out of the frame but you must bear in mind it is bringing other objects with it and you need to create these other objects to give it more punchy look.

I try not to be too negative on these sort of photos comes with lots of experience and I will be keeping a close eye on you to see what else you come up with and it is always good to see the juniors coming up the photos like this so keep up the hard work and Iím going give you my Cadburyís cream egg award Well Done




james Smile

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LiamBull
LiamBull  2 England
31 May 2012 - 9:58 PM

thank you very much!

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Sararose
Sararose  3 United States
1 Jun 2012 - 12:20 AM

Amazing!

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Caitlin98
Caitlin98  3 England
1 Jun 2012 - 3:40 PM

This looks super! Tried to do this type of thing once- it kinda failed so great job! Smile

Caitlin x

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Niknut
Niknut e2 Member 4673 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom64 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jun 2012 - 9:22 PM

Great idea !!...& beautifully created !!....top notch !

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LiamBull
LiamBull  2 England
5 Jun 2012 - 10:56 AM

The style is called OUT OF FRAME, i would recommend Photoshop to create beautiful manipulated art Grin anyway thanks for the votes and comments

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