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All hair, make_up and photography was done by me Grin

Camera:Sony A100
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:futuristic
Username:jamiicarmenprince jamiicarmenprince
Uploaded:13 Apr 2012 - 8:56 PM
Tags:General, Nude / glamour, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10865 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2860 Constructive Critique Points
14 Apr 2012 - 3:46 PM

Welcome to EPZ Jamii.

You havent provided your shot details, or what you wanted to achieve with this, so providing critique is really shooting in thee dark. Its essential to provide this information so we have something to go on.

Otherwise its an image you either like or not, and we can be inadvertently unfair if we comment negatively, not knowing your intent.

As a new member, a few things to know:

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Heres goes anyway.

The hair and make up is very well done. The composition, with the model looking to the camera right and being close to the right edge of the frame is a little jarring, and would look better if she was further from the right, as Frank has pointed out.

her skin appears washed out (might be intentional) and overexposed, and as an example, Ive shown a mod with a little mote tone and colour in the skin, with the added space.




regards



Willie

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jamiicarmenprince

hi there, this photo was for a national hairdressing competiton. the subject was futuristic. the outline was pale skin,heroin stature, odd head shape, captured in an odd way. makeup was white dust across eyes nose and lower forehead. hair was cut to perfection during shoot and the back drop is the original one which i had placed two bright lights behind backdrop to give the hair definition. the angle of her head was to show the hair in its best angle. thanks or your suggestions.

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jamiicarmenprince

how do i find the ,odifications

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