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I wanted to show a large depth of field and show a close up of the beautiful detail on this bird.

Camera:Sony A100
Lens:Sony 18-70
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Natrual blue beauty
Username:jamiicarmenprince jamiicarmenprince
Uploaded:18 Oct 2012 - 8:28 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Digitally manipulated, Wildlife / nature
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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
19 Oct 2012 - 11:56 AM

The peacock's head is not sharp and the composition leaves a little to be desired.

Without EXIF (On your last upload, Wille asked you to add it on your next upload if you remember) it is very difficult to comment being as you wanted a large DoF but haven't achieved it.

Compositionally I would have preferred to have the picture taken from ahead of the bird and also more space permitted to teh RHS the way the bird is facing. Given that, it makes the crop somewhat tight.

I hope this has been helpful.

Last Modified By Moderator Team at 19 Oct 2012 - 12:12 PM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom871 Constructive Critique Points
19 Oct 2012 - 4:29 PM

Not enough info to go on. Decent shot actually, a bit of a different angle. I might prefer the depth of field shifted deeper into the image with the crest a little less sharp and the beak more so.

Paul

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jamiicarmenprince

Thanks a lot for feed back i will keep that all in mind. Smile

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