If I'm brutally honest (and you said that was Ok ) it looks like too much of a set up, the foot on the blue pot appears contrived, as does the can in the pocket. My eye is drawn to that even though there is so much vibrant colour. I love the hand movement and think a much tighter crop, losing the 'props' would work. I teach secondary school kids, many of whom spend their spare time doing this and are very proud of it (even though they know that they should not be breaking the law!) and so wouldn't have a hoodie on either. Hope that's ok? jane