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Just been messing around with CS5 and reading Digital Photo and trying there projects out.

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:High above New York
Username:janeil janeil
Uploaded:27 Mar 2011 - 11:08 PM
Tags:Digital art, Digitally manipulated, Landscape / travel, Portraits / people
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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8754 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1587 Constructive Critique Points
28 Mar 2011 - 2:00 PM

Hello, Neil. You display a competence with manipulations, and have produced an interesting image as a result of your "messing around" and trying out projects. It's good to try out different techniques. I just wonder if you have tried to include too many things in one picture. Firstly, the man is facing the camera, and I feel it would be better for him to be looking at the scene which is behind him, so that he has some association with it. I feel that he also looks somewhat disassociated from the scene because of his colours, which are not echoed in the background. As to the background, I am not keen on the large expanse of white in the sky, which immediately captures the attention, so would prefer it to perhaps be a light blue. If that is a rain effect in the sky, it doesn't seem to relate well to the brightness of the scene, so maybe that is an unnecessary inclusion. Just my thoughts, but do keep having fun.
Pamela.

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Pontepineapple
10 Apr 2011 - 10:02 PM

Knew I'd seen this somewhere ! Just read the article in DP. Wink

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