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Thank you all for your C&C's on yesterday's spider image.

Just a simple rose from our garden today taken just after a shower - a shower of rain that is - not just after I had a shower GrinGrin

Thanks for looking
Jason

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D800 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Tamron SP 90.0 mm f/2.8 Macro Check out Totally Tamron!
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:24 Jun 2014 - 8:06 PM
Focal Length:90mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.1
Aperture:f/22.0
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:+1/3
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:On, Return detected
White Balance:Auto
Title:After the Rain
Username:jasonrwl jasonrwl
Uploaded:25 Jun 2014 - 8:04 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flowers & plants, Rose
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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 4Irishkate vcard United Kingdom74 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jun 2014 - 9:04 AM

Like little pearl drops on the rose and very beautiful.
'After the Rain' is my perfume.
Kate GrinGrinGrin

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom872 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jun 2014 - 1:20 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Quite nice but slightly mixed feelings with regards to depth of field and corresponding sharpness plane. There is a lot of drops there, some very sharp, sone not, but no compositional shape. I would prefer a dominent area of extreme sharpness, with all the remainder at various degrees of softness.

The centre of the bloom being unsharp also pulls the eye.

Paul

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taggart
taggart e2 Member 1042 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jun 2014 - 2:52 PM

It has gorgeous color and the drops are perfectly done!

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CarolAnnLauderdale
CarolAnnLauderdale e2 Member CarolAnnLauderdale vcard United Kingdom
25 Jun 2014 - 4:42 PM

Beautiful image. SmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
Carol

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Nigeve1
Nigeve1 e2 Member 1831 forum postsNigeve1 vcard United Kingdom91 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jun 2014 - 7:04 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A lovely delicacy to parts of this image, along with good highlights in the droplets. I find that my eye naturally gravitates to the out of focus centre of the flower away from the areas where I would want it to. I have tried cropping but have not achieved a satisfactory result. The same technique with a different composition could yield a stunning result.

Thanks for your critique on my Fulmar image.

Nigel

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2942 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jun 2014 - 7:21 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Its very good. You have exactly what you wanted, the petals and the drops, in nice detail.

What it does need to get it where it needs to be is additional exposure; its a little under, and it makes a considerable difference when its increased a little, - see mod.

Beware that when in Manual mode, its not likely that using exposure compensation actually does anything apart from showing it on an indicator, as you control all the other variables. So in M mode, use the meter to push the exposure up, using wither aperture, shutter or ISO



regards


Willie

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