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Camera:Nikon D80 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-135
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Dawn
Username:jasonrwl jasonrwl
Uploaded:5 Feb 2010 - 10:26 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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polly470
polly470 e2 Member 525 forum postspolly470 vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
5 Feb 2010 - 10:29 PM

So gorgeous...
Pauline

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DRicherby
DRicherby  6269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
5 Feb 2010 - 10:40 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Welcome to ePhotozine!

This is a beautiful, serene start to your portfolio.

There are a couple of things I'd be tempted to clone out to make an even stronger image. The ripple and `spiky' plant on the far left edge of the frame are a bit disruptive over there and could easily be cloned out, or even cropped without significantly altering the composition. Also, the bird at the back doesn't look quite right overlapping the hills — I think the image would be visually simpler without that overlap. The same could possibly be said of the two birds at the front.

I don't know how you feel about edits like that; maybe it goes further than you want with your own photographs. I think the crop's pretty uncontroversial and I, personally, would be happy with cloning out the bird because it doesn't really change the fundamentals of what we're seeing. In any case, I think this is already a very strong photograph and I look forward to seeing more.

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Imagephotographics

Wonderful image

Chris

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hp_fruity
hp_fruity  2 United Kingdom
8 Jun 2014 - 11:46 PM

Very nice just the way it is.

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