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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:EF50mm f/1.4 USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:28 Mar 2013 - 2:15 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.4
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/3200sec
Exposure Comp:+1/3
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Partial
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Vent
Username:JawDborn JawDborn
Uploaded:28 Mar 2013 - 5:50 PM
Tags:General, Minimalist
Votes:Voting Disabled

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7395 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom971 Constructive Critique Points
28 Mar 2013 - 6:04 PM

I'm imagining the expressions on the faces of the little audience that assembled behind you as you took this... Wink
Moira

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Jestertheclown
28 Mar 2013 - 6:14 PM

Interesting Jack.

The inclusion of the crack in the paint in the bottom right is necessary but to some extent, it dictates the composition of the rest, placing the airbrick pretty close to a thirds intersection.
Now!
You know what I think about that and in this case I think disregarding the RoT, had you been able to, would help.
I reckon that the brick would be better placed somewhere randomly, in the 'wrong' place.

Just a thought.

Bren.

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JawDborn
JawDborn e2 Member 2722 forum postsJawDborn vcard England
28 Mar 2013 - 6:15 PM

Thank you for the comment, Moira. I nearly got run over taking this shot: it's the wall of what used to beSad my local in my drinking days. I'm having a crack at abstract/ minimalist photography, as I 'm a bit tired of dickybirds and flowers.

Jack

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rambler
rambler e2 Member 5467 forum postsrambler vcard England14 Constructive Critique Points
28 Mar 2013 - 6:16 PM

Or was the young blonde lady just to quick for you? Smile

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JawDborn
JawDborn e2 Member 2722 forum postsJawDborn vcard England
28 Mar 2013 - 6:29 PM

Thank you for your considered comment, Bren. It was good of you to take the time and trouble. There was a huge crack in the upper right which I spot- healing-brushed out. I left the cracks inthe lower left to balance the picture. I'll take up your suggestions, and experiment a bit.

Cheers,

Jack

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JawDborn
JawDborn e2 Member 2722 forum postsJawDborn vcard England
28 Mar 2013 - 6:34 PM

Lower right, it should have been!

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 32917 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom99 Constructive Critique Points
28 Mar 2013 - 7:02 PM

An image which for me works very well.

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin

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Joline
Joline e2 Member 8Joline vcard United States51 Constructive Critique Points
29 Mar 2013 - 11:47 AM

This is a superb minimalist image. The little details and cracks in the wall add to it immensely. Very well done.

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