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Wheels at Tanfield Railway. These were in the old workshop. The growing twigs and the discoloured wall gave the atmosphere of neglect, and the wheels hinted ata busy workshop in times past. I cropped the top of the photo to give balance.
The camera, a compact, was set at ISO 800, as the workshop was gloomy. manipulation in Lighroom 4, to bring out texture in the wall.

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix X10
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:27 Apr 2012 - 1:34 PM
Focal Length:8.6mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.0
Aperture:f/2.2
Shutter Speed:1/15sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Wheels
Username:JawDborn JawDborn
Uploaded:9 May 2013 - 9:32 AM
Tags:Photo journalism, Transport
Votes:Voting Disabled
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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 103999 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland24 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2013 - 10:28 AM

like the framing and the contrasts Smile

have had a go at a mod..just a few changes Smile

Last Modified By cats_123 at 9 May 2013 - 10:28 AM

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JawDborn
JawDborn e2 Member 2719 forum postsJawDborn vcard England
9 May 2013 - 11:14 AM

Thank you Jeff. Mod a lot better than the original. Thank you for the info about use of Liightroom:I'm still finding my way round it.

Regards,

Jack

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woolybill1 e2 Member 7woolybill1 vcard United Kingdom65 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2013 - 1:36 PM

I am impressed by the extreme subtlety of tones in the ironwork for the ISO used.
Very pleasing composition, and one where the white background actually works!
Regards
Bill

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JawDborn
JawDborn e2 Member 2719 forum postsJawDborn vcard England
9 May 2013 - 2:19 PM

Thank you for the comment Bill. The Fuji X10 in a remarkable camera, and I'm finding it useful for macros of wild flowers and lichens.
Cheers,

Jack

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banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2013 - 3:40 PM

Very nice, tones and mood work well.

My only small suggestion would be to clone out that rusty shaft, bottom left that runs out of the frame. Ive done this in the mod Ive uploaded.



Regards


Willie

Last Modified By banehawi at 9 May 2013 - 3:44 PM

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JawDborn
JawDborn e2 Member 2719 forum postsJawDborn vcard England
9 May 2013 - 4:01 PM

Many thanks for the suggestion, Willie. The cloning out in the mod. certainly improved the photo.Smile

Cheers,

Jack

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morpheus1955 e2 Member 7morpheus1955 vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2013 - 4:42 PM

Super image, great composition, textures and tones, I love the curves too

Hugh

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widtink
widtink  2406 forum posts Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2013 - 6:44 PM

Great image Jack i love the subtle tones in the metal Smile Iam not going to critique a better tog than me GrinGrinGrin

Rod

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Alda
Alda  146 forum posts United Kingdom27 Constructive Critique Points
10 May 2013 - 11:27 AM

Nice GrinGrinGrin

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