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Just thoughts

Camera:Canon s60
Title:Thought
Username:jaydeef jaydeef
Uploaded:1 Mar 2007 - 5:25 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flash / lighting, Portraits / people
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Idscornwall
1 Mar 2007 - 8:18 PM

I have a girl of a similar age and know how hard it is to get them to stand still long enough to compose a photo so well done on this one! It gets a bit dark above the forehead and maybe a reflector would have been good - but the exposure and apature setting seem ok to me. nice one.

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webjam
webjam  10292 forum posts Netherlands11 Constructive Critique Points
2 Mar 2007 - 1:34 PM

Since this is a little girl's portrait, I would lighten it a bit up - just doing some adjusting with the Levels in PS. I would also lighten up her eyes a bit, to bring back the real colour. To make the face stand out really well, you could also brush away the background a bit with a dark colour, and crop some of the bottom, so that the face will get the attention.
This is a lovely face - hope you can get her to pose more often for you!
Jacqueline

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jaydeef
jaydeef  8 United Kingdom
2 Mar 2007 - 2:12 PM

Hi
Thanks for your constructive comments and ideas, They are most welcome
John

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