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Another from the same session as the others I've been posting recently, any comments much appreciated

Camera:Olympus e620
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Untitled
Username:jayhawk2000 jayhawk2000
Uploaded:5 Jul 2010 - 8:09 PM
Tags:Male, Man, Portrait, Portraits / people
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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8759 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1591 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jul 2010 - 2:05 PM

It's nice to see your model smiling. I'd like to have seen his body facing the left as well as his head, as it would give him some connection with the vehicle in the background which, at the moment, is just there and, being in good focus, is constantly pulling the eye. So, maybe blur the background a bit? I actually like the rusty old Ford and can see some photographic potential there. There is better lighting on his face in this one, too, but it looks like it was taken outside and he is squinting a bit, so the eyes aren't so captivating.
Pamela.

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