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Still a work in progress as I'm not yet happy with a few elements, but maybe some helpful comments will spur me on? Thanks for clicking!
Excellent. Makes a refreshing change to see a male model.
Perhaps a little off the top? Although I must admit I love the texture in the wall & door frame.
excellent..think his curly hair on his RH side spoils the look..but like the delapidation around him
I think you should be fairly happy with this one, Robert. You have made good use of the light coming from the left, considering your model is facing in that direction, and have a good shadow area behind him, too. The background has some good texture, but it's the gold door frame that bothers me because it is so intrusive. I'd like to have seen just the texture on the wall behind him, so perhaps if he had stood a bit more to the right, the door frame may not have been included in the frame. I appreciate that you are trying to bring in the condition of the building, so am sorry about that. I have done a modification where I cloned more wall into the left side, cropped and selectively sharpened the eyes. I'm afraid I cropped off the single nipple, which kept drawing my eye, and is sitting right on the frame edge. I have put the modification on your previous CG image.
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