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Still a work in progress as I'm not yet happy with a few elements, but maybe some helpful comments will spur me on? Thanks for clicking!

Camera:Olympus e620
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Untitled
Username:jayhawk2000 jayhawk2000
Uploaded:22 Jul 2010 - 6:03 PM
Tags:Male, Man, Portrait, Portraits / people
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davey_griffo
22 Jul 2010 - 7:31 PM

Excellent. Makes a refreshing change to see a male model.

Perhaps a little off the top? Although I must admit I love the texture in the wall & door frame.

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 104018 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jul 2010 - 11:22 PM

excellent..think his curly hair on his RH side spoils the look..but like the delapidation around him

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pamelajean Critique Team 8763 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1592 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jul 2010 - 2:34 PM

I think you should be fairly happy with this one, Robert. You have made good use of the light coming from the left, considering your model is facing in that direction, and have a good shadow area behind him, too. The background has some good texture, but it's the gold door frame that bothers me because it is so intrusive. I'd like to have seen just the texture on the wall behind him, so perhaps if he had stood a bit more to the right, the door frame may not have been included in the frame. I appreciate that you are trying to bring in the condition of the building, so am sorry about that. I have done a modification where I cloned more wall into the left side, cropped and selectively sharpened the eyes. I'm afraid I cropped off the single nipple, which kept drawing my eye, and is sitting right on the frame edge. I have put the modification on your previous CG image.
Pamela.

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