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bit down hearted about my pic's
need some good critique to put me back on track....

Title:autumn light critique
Username:jayhyk jayhyk
Uploaded:12 Oct 2009 - 5:24 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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munk
munk  10 United Kingdom
12 Oct 2009 - 5:35 PM

Beautiful light captured here Jay, like the composition.
Keep on clicking.
Graham.

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Nickscape
Nickscape  8695 forum posts England9 Constructive Critique Points
12 Oct 2009 - 5:41 PM

Gorgeous lighting, perhaps the best you could have hoped for. The end results is really good, the colours are spot on.

Composition wise i really like the tree, i think it might be slightly too left of the frame though as it does quite feel like a feature of the shot at the moment which is should be, i think id also take a step backwards and move the camera higher to get more of those foreground plants in as the light hitting them is perfect but they seem to not be part of the whole scene, rather just poking in at the bottom.

Exposure is very well balanced, the only observation being that the difference in brightness between the water on the right and the sky above the horizon is different, in an indeal world these would match so i think a slightly weaker grad filter would have been better.

I would definatly hang the fininshed version on my wall.

Nick

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dabhandphotographics e2 Member 5dabhandphotographics vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
12 Oct 2009 - 5:50 PM

great colour and light.Dave

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10869 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2869 Constructive Critique Points
12 Oct 2009 - 6:50 PM

I agree that the foreground elements should be either more prominent, or removed completely. It is a nice scene, can you got the light captured well.


Added a mod for comparison.. We all lose the mojo at time too, - so its usually best to take a break and come back refreshed!


Regards


W

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shandoor
shandoor  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
12 Oct 2009 - 6:57 PM

Beautiful image with superb lighting agree with taking out the foreground as unfortunately the one bit of twig on the right is blurred but a beautiful image all the same
Alexa

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Imagephotographics

Fantastic image !!!!!

Chris

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erry
erry  5 Indonesia
14 Oct 2009 - 6:37 AM

Fantastic lighting....

erry

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feather1
feather1  4 United Kingdom
25 Aug 2010 - 10:11 PM

Nice picture. You caught the late sun really well and the dark sky helps well done. Rob

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