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A sort of deadpan shot of shapes and textures. Any thoughts on the composition? I feel it takes the eye out of the frame to the right a touch, maybe? Too much black on the left?

Camera:nikon d90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-70
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:barn
Username:JBA JBA
Uploaded:9 Sep 2009 - 10:20 AM
Tags:Architecture, Black & white, Specialist / abstract
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BlueRoom
BlueRoom e2 Member 873 forum postsBlueRoom vcard United Kingdom20 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2009 - 11:59 AM

A crop about halfway through the black area on the left would give the abstract nature of this a bit more balance in my opinion, but apart fom that I think the shapes, textures and your excellent mono conversion make this a very pleasing image.

Eric

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