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I welcome all possible feedback on this one. I really want it to work, but my gut feeling is telling me that it hasn't got a chance. Is the composition too boring? Too much forest? Boring sky?
I was really hoping for some clouds the evening I took this, but unfortunately they werent there to paint the sky for me.
| Camera: | Nikon D300 |
| Lens: | 50mm f1.4 |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Title: | Grimaud |
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| Uploaded: | 26 Jul 2010 - 9:54 PM |
| Tags: | France, General, Landscape, Landscape / travel, Long exposure, Nature, Night, Night / low light, Nikkor, Nikon, Village |
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to much forest john, and i'd take a little off the sky. keep trying it's the only way to learn. good luck.
john
Not far off at all. Probably a bit off the sky as it is featureless as you say, but you can't crop the forest much without loosing some of the buildings. I can accept the dark featureless forest area because it is totally evident that this is late evening with the last vestiges of light.
Paul
Hi JE I really do like this as is but am compelled to have a go at a mod. First I corrected the levels as the histogram fell short at the RHS. I then cropped top and bottom to make it more panoramic and focus on the more interesting parts of the scene. Finished off with a touch of unsharp mask.
Hope you like.
Phil

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