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Sorry for doing this, but I got such good feedback yesterday on how to improve this that I said I'd give it a go.

Modified yesterdays upload to lighten the left hand side of the life buoy as suggested. I also lightened the image slightly overall, used curves to increase contrast & remove slight colour cast, dodged & burned, & went around and cloned out all the papers in the grasses.

I got rid of the dodgy border & replaced with this other dodgy border!

Interested in feedback again. Thanks.

Trevor.

Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:Sigma 18-125 @ 18mm
Recording media:RAW (ISO 100)
Title:Just In Case (II)
Username:jellylegs jellylegs
Uploaded:29 Mar 2006 - 2:26 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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chrisfroud
29 Mar 2006 - 2:36 AM

Yes, that's better Smile
Chris

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Chant57
Chant57 e2 Member 8371 forum postsChant57 vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
29 Mar 2006 - 2:42 AM

Much better framing, and a "tidier" image.
C

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John_Duckett
29 Mar 2006 - 3:16 AM

Yep much better with this border

John

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deegee
deegee  9181 forum posts United Kingdom
29 Mar 2006 - 5:46 AM

Liked yesterdays, like todays Smile

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jimbocarroll
29 Mar 2006 - 7:11 AM

Excellent work, better than last post so the effort was worth it!

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Sabreur
Sabreur  9767 forum posts England
29 Mar 2006 - 7:16 AM

This border is definitely better - adding to an already excellant picture. The colouring is an improvement over yesterday's version.

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martinproe
29 Mar 2006 - 8:38 AM

I'd have been delighted with either of these, but I do prefer this one.

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jellylegs
jellylegs  1059 forum posts Ireland
29 Mar 2006 - 9:40 PM

Thanks for the feedback guys.

Trevor.

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CollY
CollY  8
31 Mar 2006 - 2:30 PM

Great moody in this image, love the lighting and the strength of colour...fabulous sky to match the detail in the FG.
Well done
COlleen

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PatrickSmith
3 Apr 2006 - 5:23 PM

Yes, this one overall looks better to me. Good reworking.
Patrick

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