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Another photo of my friend on her trampoline. I like the sun on her face, but is it too bright?

Camera:sony cybershot DSC - F828
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:trampoline
Username:jessbu jessbu
Uploaded:1 Nov 2007 - 6:28 PM
Tags:Action, Caroline, Curly hair, Fun, General, Girl, Innocent, Jumping, Lighting, Portrait, Portraits / people, Sports / action, Summer, Sun, Trampoline
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simont
simont  102248 forum posts England4 Constructive Critique Points
1 Nov 2007 - 8:16 PM

Way too bright as you've almost lost all her face.
The washing behind is a bit distracting as well.
Simon

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MrsS
MrsS  74527 forum posts England18 Constructive Critique Points
1 Nov 2007 - 9:01 PM

It is a bit too bright for me, Jess, but it really depends what effect you were aiming for. I do like the light shining through her wrap, tho' Smile

Fran x

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bayleaf
bayleaf  6 United Kingdom
2 Nov 2007 - 2:46 PM

Would have been much better I feel if you hadn't taken direct into the sun. Maybe you were aiming for the shot to look like this?

Best wishes,

John.

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jessbu
jessbu  6 United Kingdom
2 Nov 2007 - 3:41 PM

thanks for your comments. I wanted an angelic picture and to portray innocence, and the lighting symbolises this but i agree that it is too bright as you need tyo see more detail on her face. Thanks again for your improvement comments

Jess
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Last Modified By jessbu at 2 Nov 2007 - 3:41 PM

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