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last black and white one for a while.

Title:Daydreamer
Username:KayleighTakesPhotos KayleighTakesPhotos
Uploaded:19 Feb 2010 - 12:13 PM
Tags:Black & white
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clicknimagine
19 Feb 2010 - 12:18 PM

beautiful portrait...

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saeidNL
saeidNL  4 Netherlands3 Constructive Critique Points
19 Feb 2010 - 12:18 PM

Excellent work .well done,
saeid

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davey_griffo
19 Feb 2010 - 12:32 PM

Excellent portrait.

I don't know whether it's the angle, or the slight burn-out in the corner, but the shoulder is a bit lost. Had the shot been upright, your eye would fill in the blanks, following the line of her hair.

Just a small critique, & not one that detracts from the shot.

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fraser
fraser  10631 forum posts Scotland14 Constructive Critique Points
19 Feb 2010 - 12:36 PM

I like it, I think Davey's right though and this would be fixed by a square crop taking off the left side of the frame.
Fraser

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johnnyboy114
19 Feb 2010 - 4:35 PM

I like this just as it is.....love the fact that some detail has been lost....gives it almost a candid feel to it....superbly caught and perfectly processed....

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Jestertheclown
19 Feb 2010 - 9:18 PM


Quote: the shoulder is a bit lost.

See what you mean Dave although, as you say, it doesn't spoil the shot in any way.
An alternative which I think would work would be to remove the strap and leave the whole corner empty.
Just a thought.
With or without our opinions, it's a great shot Kayleigh.
Jester.

Edit: Just had a look at you pf.
You obviously like this kind of work and you're obviously pretty good at it. Your images are a bit short on votes but don't let that put you off. That's probably because they're not 'mainstream' enough. Don't be concerned.
Keep it up!

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 19 Feb 2010 - 9:23 PM

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