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having seen a lot of other people's work on this site i have attempted to add a little more class to the original twins i posted yesterday
i know its not quite the digital art i admire from some of you 'scaramanga' being amazing but we all have to start somewhere

if any of you have suggestions on how to improve i would be grateful for your contribution

Brand:Nikon CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:6 Jun 2011 - 6:33 PM
Focal Length:0mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.0
Aperture:f/0.0
Shutter Speed:1/800sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:No Flash
Title:twins 2
Username:jimmymack jimmymack
Uploaded:10 Jun 2011 - 10:38 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flowers & plants
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akh e2 Member 101149 forum postsakh vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jun 2011 - 11:50 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like the way you have used a vignette to draw attention to the flower, something I tend to do in all of my shots, but personally I find the hard edges a bit distracting and unnatural. Try feathering the selection more to even out the graduation. I use NX2 to process my images rather than PS along with the Nik Colorefex filter 'Darken/Lighten centre'.
Tony

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jimmymack e2 Member 3jimmymack vcard United Kingdom
10 Jun 2011 - 1:18 PM

thanks for the advice its good to get positive help.
and am grateful for you taking the time to look at my pictures

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Metro6R4  4 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
19 Sep 2011 - 6:39 PM

Well done buddy. I like this one........... It would look good on any wall.

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