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Tired to take an eye catching photo, of some fresh garlic. Using backlighting and a reflective service.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:EF100mm F/2.8 Macro USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 Mar 2010 - 10:30 PM
Focal Length:100mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/16.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Fresh Garlic
Username:jnfotos jnfotos
Uploaded:13 Aug 2011 - 7:10 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flowers & plants
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franken
franken e2 Member 112921 forum postsfranken vcard Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
13 Aug 2011 - 7:11 PM

It works but I think there's to much space doing nothing on each side.

Ken

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stevenb
stevenb e2 Member 10260 forum postsstevenb vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
13 Aug 2011 - 7:50 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I've done a mod , see what you think. a bit more contast and then polarization filter used .
Bill

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
14 Aug 2011 - 4:07 PM

Technically first class but subject fails to excite, although this is the kind of thing you often see on pub walls these days. More of an illustrative image.

Paul

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Niknut
Niknut e2 Member 4399 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom60 Constructive Critique Points
14 Aug 2011 - 4:22 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This really appeals to me !.....lovely simple image, with a gorgeous 'hi-key' effect.....top notch !

If it were mine, I'd be inclined to crop 20% from the LH side, to offset the 'subject' so that it is 'leaning'(?) into the frame................

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 9710 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2671 Constructive Critique Points
14 Aug 2011 - 5:21 PM

Jerry, - look at the mod that Eviscera has loaded, - thats all you need to take from this as critique!



regards


Willie

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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61581 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom572 Constructive Critique Points
14 Aug 2011 - 9:29 PM

well i have to say that it started as a very nice and competently taken shot, but personally i never like to see a split composition and i was going to suggest that you crop from the base.
then i see that EVISERA has done a mod of that and gone a step or a mile beyond.

this mod had taken an eye catching shot and projected it to a whole new level of eyecatching and market potential but its really frustrating that there isnt a step by step of how to get there by blending the texture etc.

a full breakdown of workflow on this would have been good information for a whole lot of viewers who look in too.
Phil

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nonur
nonur e2 Member 5nonur vcard Turkey8 Constructive Critique Points
28 Nov 2011 - 9:38 AM

I simply like it!

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