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Daylight inside a mobile home. Plus a wee bit of photoshop softening.

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Camera:eos10d
Lens:EF 50mm f/1.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Seduction
Username:johnp johnp
Uploaded:8 Feb 2009 - 3:06 PM
Tags:Blue, Nude / glamour, Olivia, Open shirt, Portrait, Portraits / people, Seduction, Shirt
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
8 Feb 2009 - 3:39 PM

Sharpen the eyes, hair and mouth, - they should be excluded from the softened areas, - otherwise a nice shot with good light.

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Lourens_Vorster

Very good image, Beautiful model. If the eyes were sharp it would be perfect
Lourens

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8 Feb 2009 - 5:06 PM

nice portrait John.

Al.

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td1556
td1556  8 United Kingdom
8 Feb 2009 - 5:24 PM

Potentially a very nice image (beautiful model), but I agree it has been softened just abit too much.

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VidB
VidB  5 United Kingdom11 Constructive Critique Points
8 Feb 2009 - 5:50 PM

Sharpen them eye's and it will be superb great eye contact.
Dave

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johnp
johnp  10139 forum posts United Kingdom
9 Feb 2009 - 6:40 AM

Thanks, guys. To be honest I'd forgotten that the eyes hadn't been sharpened. I'll post another from the same shoot that will show how Olivia's eyes can positively smoulder!!

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SKavanagh
SKavanagh  7312 forum posts England5 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2009 - 7:47 AM

Beautiful shot
Steve

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