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Wyming Brook. Any comments on improvement appreciated.

Camera:Nikon D50 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-55
Title:The Brook
Username:jonc jonc
Uploaded:18 Jan 2006 - 5:30 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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synaesthesia
18 Jan 2006 - 6:32 AM

Do you know what Jon? There does seem to be something missing.

But I can't put my finger on it.

The water looks great, the foliage fab.

Maybe you need to get lower and/or get in the water. Needs something in the F/G to punch you in the eye.

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Dotrob
Dotrob  8 Wales
18 Jan 2006 - 6:36 AM

Nice shot.
Dot

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davidcollins
davidcollins e2 Member 9104 forum postsdavidcollins vcard Scotland1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jan 2006 - 6:53 AM

a nice shot .

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MoWiz
MoWiz  9114 forum posts United Kingdom
18 Jan 2006 - 7:18 AM

like it
Mo

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UserRemoved
18 Jan 2006 - 9:32 AM

Can see what Al means, tho' think the comp's fine (lower and you'd lose the stream behind). Think a bit of dodge and burn in the water, darken a little and maybe a touch of curves. Having said that, a good shot nonetheless!

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jonc
jonc  10
19 Jan 2006 - 3:53 AM

Thanks for your comments. I tend to agree.

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synaesthesia
23 Jan 2006 - 4:09 AM

I know what it is! Did you take the same shot in portrait mode? Please upload if you have.

I want to see more of the stream and trees beyond.

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