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Found an old woollen mill in Mid-Wales which was abandoned by workers in 1961. The mill still contains baskets of wool, chairs and lots of machinery so there'll be more photos to follow.

Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Lens:EF20mm f/2.8 USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:5 Apr 2012 - 5:28 PM
Focal Length:20mm
Aperture:f/9.9
Shutter Speed:2sec
ISO:100
Title:Still Standing...
Username:Jonny5874 Jonny5874
Uploaded:6 Apr 2012 - 12:47 AM
Tags:Chair, Cobwebs, Cogs, Digitally manipulated, Dirt, Dust, Factory, Gears, Hdr, Mill, Seat
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janeez
janeez e2 Member 61248 forum postsjaneez vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
6 Apr 2012 - 2:16 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is a great picture and I think it would benefit hugely from a bit more work. By cropping the image so it only has the chair in it you immediately make the title fit the picture. I would then clone out the black cable running across the back of the chair. The crop should also take out the highlighted top right corner as this is quite a dominant feature. Hope you don't mind my critique but I really think it's worth trying out. Smile I would love to see the result.

Jane

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paskinmj
paskinmj  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
6 Apr 2012 - 2:45 AM

Great texture and composition.
Matt

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photoshy
photoshy  3 United Kingdom
6 Apr 2012 - 9:15 AM

like this image a lot, well done.
stuart.

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43672 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom107 Constructive Critique Points
6 Apr 2012 - 9:39 AM

A lovely image, full of nostalgia, and distant memories.

Regards Nathan

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meniko
meniko e2 Member 3meniko vcard Cyprus
6 Apr 2012 - 7:33 PM

what a stroke of luck to find this mill !
Must be such an enjoyment to keep records of all that stuff there...
Looking forward to see more of it,
thanks for it,
Meniko

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 431 forum postsIrishkate vcard United Kingdom76 Constructive Critique Points
7 Apr 2012 - 12:36 AM

Agree with janeez's comments. the chair is fantastic and would "stand" alone!Well spotted.GrinKate

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Jonny5874
Jonny5874  5 United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
7 Apr 2012 - 1:19 AM

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated and I've also now uploaded a cropped version with the light blocked out, huge difference!

Thanks,

Jon

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helenlinda
helenlinda e2 Member 7338 forum postshelenlinda vcard United Kingdom21 Constructive Critique Points
7 Apr 2012 - 8:07 AM

I like the full picture - especially the source of the light and all the textures on the wall - if I was going to do anything at all to v1 it would just be to remove that cable
...............but then we all see things differently SmileSmile
Helen

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janeez
janeez e2 Member 61248 forum postsjaneez vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
7 Apr 2012 - 11:31 AM

Brilliant crop. I think this works really well. You are so lucky to have this place to photograph. Smile

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mikbee
mikbee e2 Member 7mikbee vcard Scotland7 Constructive Critique Points
9 Apr 2012 - 11:59 PM

A super three legged chair here.
And good grotty wall too !!
Mick.

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minter
minter e2 Member 4minter vcard United Kingdom
14 Apr 2012 - 5:19 PM

Agree totally with Jane's comments - your version 2 is almost there - just the cable to go!

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reflectionsinlight

DO NOT ASKE ME WHY BUT V2........Sad 3 legged chair

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