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Dusk looking out to sea from Tamariu village

Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:EF 24-70mm f2.8L
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Dusk at Tamariu
Username:JulianWells JulianWells
Uploaded:3 Mar 2008 - 9:44 PM
Tags:Costa brava, Landscape, Landscape / travel, Spain, Tamariu
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lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx e2 Member 661 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
3 Mar 2008 - 9:47 PM

I felt that there was too much sea, which lacked interest so please see my mod

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kalseru
kalseru e2 Member 7kalseru vcard England9 Constructive Critique Points
3 Mar 2008 - 10:16 PM

Agree the sea is a bit flat tonally and featureless could crop it as lonely_oryx says or maybe try and pull a bit of colour and texture out of it with PS ?
Andy

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JulianWells
4 Mar 2008 - 12:25 AM

Thanks guys for your comments. Your suggestions certainly seem to work better. Thanks for the mods.

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randomrubble
4 Mar 2008 - 1:32 PM

The interest is indeed in a small section of the shot, I think that theboat is a little too close to the fisherman and perhaps a small move to the right, when taking the shot, may have helped.

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