Hi Lily, I'd like to welcome you to EPZ too! A gorgeous start to your portfolio.
I see you've already had some brilliant critique from Tanya, there's not a lot I can add. A really cute cat and a well timed photo! Looking at the EXIF data I see the 'Date Taken' is 2013, this may be because the date/clock details need to be changed in the camera settings.
I am looking forward to seeing more of your work. If you have any problems or queries, don't be afraid to ask!