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i aint been on here in a while been doing a lot of photoshoots but can you tell me what i can work on , and what you think of this photo because i like it but it dont seem perfect , i couldnt get her hand in because the wall was white and it wouldnt blend in with the green background

Brand:Panasonic
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:1 Jan 2012 - 12:50 AM
Focal Length:10.4mm
Aperture:f/3.9
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Portrait
Metering Mode:Multi-spot
Flash:Auto, Fired
Title:Hayley
Username:katiejames_2012 katiejames_2012
Uploaded:18 Nov 2012 - 9:37 PM
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84360 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
19 Nov 2012 - 7:08 AM

Hi Katie. As you've uploaded this image here, I'm going to be brutely honest, please don't take it personally - it is just my opinion!

Looking at the other images you have taken during your shoot, this one is my least favourite. The pose seems awkward (with her weight bearing leg bending backwards) and, as you have pointed out, her hand has been cropped. I think you could experiment with cropping closer to her body/head as this is where all the light is.

If you would like more (brutely honest) opinions, when you upload it into the Gallery click the 'Critique' button. You won't get any votes (we're not allowed to vote in 'Critique'), but you will get honest opinions and how to rectify problems when taking the image. Smile

Last Modified By KarenFB at 19 Nov 2012 - 4:13 PM

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