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The promenade of life - or is it death?

When I took this shot I was trying to capture the three ages of the subjects - the dog and the bike were a bonus. As indeed was the central position of what for all the world looked like a headstone adorned with bright red flowers.

Thanks for looking.

Camera:Pentax K10D
Lens:18 x 55mm Kit lens and 70 x 300mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:42
Username:ketch ketch
Uploaded:2 Aug 2010 - 8:11 PM
Tags:42, General, Portraits / people
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rpba18205
rpba18205 (e2 Member)
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2 Aug 2010 - 8:31 PM
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I like it.It’s a good shot and I like the idea.
My only criticism would be that it might have better if the boy had been two paces back. But such is life & photography. We can’t always have it all our own way.
Rob

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DaveU
DaveU (e2 Member)
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2 Aug 2010 - 9:14 PM
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Something very surreal about this which really does attract me .... I think the fact that the backgound is all sky with no trace of land is hwat does it.

But .... I want to see more both to left and right in a glorious promenade-orama. I know I can't but I want to.

Rob has a fair point about the placement of the boy.

Mynett
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137 forum posts United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
2 Aug 2010 - 9:36 PM
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I like the fact that all the veiwer can see through the railings is cloud which adds to the effect you were after - all passing along on the journey of life - death

interesting

Linda

DaveU
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2 Aug 2010 - 9:38 PM
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Mmmmm .... methinks the background sky has been added in.

Sneaky but effective Wink

Last Modified By DaveU at 2 Aug 2010 - 9:39 PM
ketch
ketch (e2 Member)
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770 forum postsketch vcard Turks and Caicos Islands50 Constructive Critique Points
2 Aug 2010 - 10:35 PM
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Mmmmm ...methinks Dave is quite correct or at least the sky has been, shall we say, extended.

Thank you all so much for you very generous comments - much appreciated.

IanFlindt
2 Aug 2010 - 10:54 PM
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A strange but appealing surreality about this - the fact that the clouds appear to be emanating from a point somewhere below the promenade only adds to the strange attraction of the image.

I agree that it would have been good to have the boy standing clear of the sitting subject, and perhaps to have had the man walking into the frame rather than out of it.

Last Modified By IanFlindt at 2 Aug 2010 - 10:54 PM
debu
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India
5 Aug 2010 - 2:38 PM
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Great capture.
debu

Rach1970
5 Aug 2010 - 8:36 PM
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I like it. Think it works well... added sky or not Smile
Rachel

samlw68
7 Aug 2010 - 4:31 PM
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good shot

First class Robert, I can see it as a massive poster as people drive in the city, a bit like a Pepsi Cola poster

ketch
ketch (e2 Member)
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10 Aug 2010 - 2:56 PM
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Graham - dear chap I hadn't seen that but you are absolutely right - what a great idea too.

What a fantastic PF. I had such fun viewing your wonderful photos.

Richsr
Richsr (e2 Member)
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88 forum postsRichsr vcard England177 Constructive Critique Points
14 Aug 2010 - 4:51 PM
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Do like that sky and the light in it, think you have achieved a interesting image, do like the title too.
Regards Richard

JackAllTog
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15 Aug 2010 - 6:25 AM
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Dark sentiment but thought provoking great photo. Excellent.

helenlinda
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21 Aug 2010 - 8:01 PM
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But its the light and sky that brings this all together - wonderful capture

AshTree
2 Sep 2010 - 7:54 AM
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Just come across this and glad I did - a wonderful image, people's lives unknowingly frozen in time. I'll put this into the readers' choice gallery Smile

Theresa

grand candid
Dennis

It has the look of a Vettriano painting. I don't like Vettriano but I like this. Well done.
Steve

Almost Jack Vetriano ish in style...like this a lot.

VivienO
21 Dec 2010 - 7:05 PM
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You've captured the three ages well. Great composition and the beautiful processing of the sky gives it a painterly quality.
Vivien

Really like this. Everything is beautifully balanced. Enjoyed a look around at your work Smile

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