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I put this photo together today as i was walking around taking photos yesterday and the mount of rubbish on the floor it (cheesed)me off

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm Finepix S1500
Focal Length:24.7mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/3.3
Shutter Speed:1/220sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:BE RESPONSIBLE.....
Username:kforeman kforeman
Uploaded:21 Jan 2011 - 7:01 PM
Tags:Kforeman
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DRicherby
DRicherby  5269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jan 2011 - 8:15 PM

I think this works very well. The can is perhaps slightly over-exposed but it's perfectly sharp and I like the way you've positioned it off-centre in the frame. Putting it there makes it a photo of a space ruined by litter (exactly what you wanted) rather than a photo of the litter. I can imagine this making a good billboard ad in an anti-litter campaign.

I'd tone down the copyright message a bit as, being so bold and central, it looks like the subject of the photo; and the caption wants to be 'Be responsible', without the 'a'.

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kforeman
kforeman  5 England
21 Jan 2011 - 8:22 PM

i know i reliesed when i uploaded it now i cant remember how i did it (derr) well the hospital did say i have brain damage too.

i should know my results of my MRI scan on my hips on monday

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DRicherby
DRicherby  5269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jan 2011 - 8:30 PM

For the 'Be responsible' caption, create a new layer, initially all transparent. Draw a white box and add the text in black. Then decrease the opacity so the image shows through behind it. You can use the same trick with opacity on the copyright message, too.

Good luck with the MRI results!

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kforeman
kforeman  5 England
21 Jan 2011 - 9:02 PM

this image is actually two images in one

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom854 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2011 - 8:20 AM

Be a responsible what? A little over exposed and this needs darkening. Why have you put that huge copyright message on a shot in a critique gallery - completely ruins any effect. Sorry, I usually keep fairly quiet on this issue now, but this one is a bit much - not needed at all.

Paul

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